![]() ![]() If he was answering his own thoughts it would have been marked as a thought. Yes, I’m someone who talks to myself out loud frequently, but I’m responding to my thoughts, not the narrator. “Yes, I imagine that might make a person tense,” Fane said to himself. Well, it could be because he was more than a thousand miles away from home, he knew absolutely no one, it was his senior year in high school, and he was going to be spending it in a country he had never been to before. They’re the narrators, and you’ll figure out why I make that distinction very quickly. It wouldn’t be such a weird thing if the thoughts were theirs, but they’re not. This chapter continues the amazing tendency of characters having internal monologues through the narrator and then answering the monologue out loud. ![]() If you knew you were going to show the scene again, but from a different perspective, why spend the first chapter telling us about it twice? We continue our amazing precedent of literally seeing the same scene again. So we begin chapter 2 with Fane, our titular Prince of Wolves. Why the hell would anyone ever use that as a cover? ![]()
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